Tuesday, 15 May 2012

Up In The Clouds...


I'd rather be up there
than down here
they say when you fantasize
you fail to realize
the blatant truth...

But it hurts too much 
feel like i'm getting crushed
what i see is a storm
threatening to keep me torn
keeping me there til i cry...

but up in the clouds
i am found
don't have to suffer
this dream is a real bluffer
but here i am content...

They critisize how i feel 
about what is and what's not real
but up in the clouds
my mind's at ease, im at peace 
Now i can breathe...

Even though it's not real
I get to escape for that moment
drift from the harsh reality
back into fantasy
because it's easier for me ...

12 comments:

  1. The flow is so smooth..... very nice

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  2. gr8 one :D keep going :))

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  3. It`s awesum.... gud work Harsha :)
    kaash 1 cud stay up in the clouds, up dere 4vr !!!!

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  4. its amazzing.. keep up the good work...:)

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  5. Is it your compilation???Its awesome...very touchy and tells everyone about life's reality...keep it up girl..way to go..:)

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  6. Lovely expression ...on the cloud 9
    But here I beg to differ and suggest some corrections
    Cloud you are aspiring for may either be a dream or deep desire
    OR you may create the same in the reality by tuning your mind and the surrounding and enjoy every day...every moment
    You cannot change the destiny but you can change the change by changing the adverse effect of change. Be happy always and in every circumstances let the problems feel inferior.
    Luv Chhota Mama

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  7. Great work!!
    Very beautifully carved into words.
    Keep it up! :)

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  8. words from the heart..:)
    awesum..:)

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  9. Thank You So Much Everyone!! :)

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